Joining Form

[Xavier]

Name:Xavier

Age:26

Race:Hawk Demon

Nationality: Canadian

Gender: male

Alignment:anarchist

Organization:Capitalist

Occupation: soldier

Weapon: Duel SMG's

Stats: intelligence-100
strength-250
charisma-50
spirit-50
defense-100
endurance-250
speed-250

powers: invisibility, energy shield, and Fire Manipulation

appearance:I look like Auron from Final Fantasy X(see sig pic. got from Smashboards.com)

Personality:uncaring, unmerciful, bastard, rude, obnoxious, insulent, vengeful, sarcastic

story: Born in Canadia. My parents were killed just after I was born, I went to live with my Grandpa. He tought me to shoot, fight with a sword, and three types of martial arts(Judo, Ninjitsu, and Jiu Jitsu). He was then killed by Red Infinity operatives(He was a great Military leader in R.I. and then quit b/c he found out wat they were for and they killed him later b/c they reelized that he knew to much.). After that I spent years studying politics and phsycology, and came to the conclusion that the only fair government is an Anarchist government because that is the only way to eliminate oppression, and Crime. However I am aligned with the capitalists, because the only way to achieve revolution is with money and power. My main goal in life thus far, is to see Red Infinity Collapse.
Though there is one thing, This is a sign of subservience. I do not follow anyone. I either lead or work alone. That doesn't mean that I won't join some group, it just means that I won't take orders If they involve incredible subservience. If its a assasination Mission then I won't mind but if its just to do something that does not involve an assault on Red Infinity I really won't do it.

[Valodya Bassarov]

You can start. Zinn will look over your profile and give you suggestions. Void will look over your powers.

[Zinn]

I am not a power mod, but I should tell you in advance that copy cat powers are never, ever allowed.

OK, here are some things that need to be fixed.

1) There hasn't been a Persia for thousands of years. You are only 26. Persian culture ceased existing thousands of years ago. You could be from Iraq, Iran, etc. Technically, those countries no longer exist in the RPG, but their cultures do, sort of. Granted, Islam is banned by RI, but the culture is still there.

2) Could you please better describe Auron? Not everyone plays Final Fantasy.

3) Holy fark, I am so tired of these "my parents were killed by RI so I became a ninja/merc/superskilled rebel/whatever stories. I can't stop you from using this, or changing it, but I think I am gonna need to have a discussion with the other mods, because we have waaaaay too many people with this backstory. Seriously. The only other overused backstories are the "I am dark and have a mysterious past" people, and the "I am a fun fun anime girl who likes to have fun" people. Arg.

4) If you work for the capitalists but you don't believe in their cause, you are a mercinary.

5) What martial arts?

6) How did your grandpa know about all of this combat?

7) Why did RI bother killing off an old man?

8) You might want to consider joining the Bloody Violets. They don't have any posting people right now, and their primary goal is to see Lady Violet burn. Plus, they are funded by another faction of the government. If your character is manipulative, he could join them with the ulterior motive of being an anarchist. They aren't picky if you are skilled enough. I think Ukko is in charge of the Bloody Violets secretly, so you might want to go talk to him or have him talk to you in his disguise.

9) The Capitalist organization is called the FRA. If you decide to join them, their leader is Lady Blue.

10) Xavier isn't exactly a Middle Eastern name. You might want to change it, or explain why your name is Xavier.

[Cassandra]

Yes, we despretly need more members
Cassandra
Sargent Oak
Tsubaki
Linda
Eris (dead)
Heaven- Lee

And I beleive thats it.

[Void]

No copycat powers allowed, as Zinn stated. To quote myself from the Power Regulation Thread:

"Mimic Powers: These powers are probably one of the ones I detest the most. Basically they allow a character to copy their opponent's powers. Basically what this means is the character with the Mimic is pretty much guaranteed a win, as their opponent can't do anything that the mimic character is unable to do. Not to mention its like taking a possibly infinite number of powers for the price of one."

[Xavier]

Yo im done. if ya got any problems then forget u. Jus sayin.

[Valodya Bassarov]

The moderators are trying to give suggestions on how to create more inovative characters. You can start, but the "my parents were killed by Red Infinity" is a little overdone on this rpg, that's all.

[Xavier]

k. but i dont care. im not the most creative person in the world. so its stayin.

[Zinn]

Also, could you get a smaller sig? The one you have is huge, and slows down page loading time for some people that have slower connections.

[Xavier]

I probably have the slowest comp. in this RP so w/e.

[Void]

No, I seriously mean no copycat powers whatsoever. None. I will not allow them.

And for the record, the "change" you made to it means absolutely nothing. You can choose to copy one power, then drop it and copy another power on the fly, thus acheiving what it is I am trying to prevent. NO COPYCAT POWERS.

[Xavier]

Dude I kno that all ur trying to prevent is urself from losing a fight. I meen every1 knos that. at least by now they should hav reelized it. But ill change it anyway. because unlik u i hav class.

[Void]

Disrespect towards the moderators will not be tolerated, and if you believe you may defeat me you are more than welcome to try. I can already see by your writing skill and the powers you have chosen that you have little or no roleplaying skill, but I suppose I can waste some time putting you in your place. However my demand stands, you WILL change that power or you WILL NOT be permitted to post on this site. Already you've annoyed me and your presence here is not needed for the continuation of this roleplay. Consider yourself warned.

[Zinn]

OK, Xavier, maybe you are a little new to roleplaying. Here is the way things work. We are the mods. When we ask you to change things, you change them. Why? Because we want to make this the best RPG we can. Therefore, we have a certain standard of excellence. I can tell you right away that that standard is actually a lot lower here than it is on most other RPG's. We don't allow copycats because it makes characters basically omnipotent. In case you haven't noticed, none of Void's characters have copycats either. He follows the same rules everyone else does. I follow the same rules everyone else does. Even Bassarov has to follow those rules. I am trying to be patient here.

That being said, DO NOT disrespect the mods. Void is an excellent RPer, and a very nice dude. You, on the other hand, are showing absolutely no class whatsoever. Make the chages that he wants you to make, and that I want you to make, or you cannot start posting.

[Xavier]

Fine, I'll change it. But There are a few things I will say, and that is that this is not ever going to be the best RPG it can be. Why I bet You ask? Because I am Part of possibly one of the best RPG's on the internet. That is smashboards.com. The reason I say it is better is because it has over 17,000 members. if you doubt me then go check for yourself. the only reason I type that way is because I don't like to type like this. In my opinion, it's the biggest waste of time I have ever seen. I only type this way when I get angry, have to, and when I feel like it. Another reason that smashboards is better is because it has a better system of how things work. Everyone starts out a level one and as they battle gather experience points and level up as you fight. When you battle your stats actually matter. There is a system of currency, and you have to buy your weapons. I would love to see you try and fight me in smashboards.