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Post by Zinn on Dec 2, 2004 18:25:49 GMT -5
OK, I have to talk to Bassarov about this one. Hold on please...
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Post by Jareth on Dec 2, 2004 18:33:36 GMT -5
ok people are going to think i am Zinn after this post I am sure...lol *winks*. I am mearly pointing out things that are either in the actual join form as rules or things that we have discussed with other players in threads as concerns.
first of all your alignment must be concrete. Not...*quote*Alignment: Indiffrent. Programmed to work for Red Infinity. Dosent feel which is better.*unquote* This leaves you open to change sides if you decide another is better. You can not do that unless you have admin approval. You must PICK an alignment and stick with it...
Second of all your story has no depth...it is basically I am a drone and i do what i'm told. You have no history nor do you have any way for the players to get any idea about your character. You say he shows no emotion yet you write hes kind.
I am no power mod but I am sure one of them will want to review them before you are approved. Since you have one attack that makes you impervious to fire or any firetype elemental attack which i assume any heat attack or similar would also not effect. So we must wait on Void or Grove (who else is a power mod since bass assigned new mods I dun remember?)
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Kanti
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Red Infinity Robot
I am Kanti! Television-head robot!
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Post by Kanti on Dec 2, 2004 18:36:38 GMT -5
Firstly, he was programmed this way, on both the account of changing sides, and that he is kind. He will not change sides, due to his programming restrictions.
Secondly, that is his story. I'm sticking with it. He had no parents, because he wasn't born, he was created.
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Post by Leon on Dec 2, 2004 18:47:14 GMT -5
Though, any absolouty needed adjustments you wish for me to make on my profile will be done.
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Post by Zinn on Dec 2, 2004 19:02:51 GMT -5
Waiting for feedback from Bassarov.
OK, just so you know, this is my main problem with this:
You have taken a character from FLCL.
Technically, only Disney characters are banned, and even though I really like FLCL, I do not like fan characters, and neither do most of the other mods.
I will await the admin's opinion.
Anyway, in the meantime, in case he decides to approve this, here are some fixes:
1) Your age would be known, because you had to have been made some time.
2) You are aligned with RI, because you are programmed to be.
3) What Ministry do you belong to?
4) Switch your stats around. Charisma, not intellegence, measures personality. If you had 0 intellegence, you would be a stone. I suggest since you are a machine, that you have 0 charisma, and add a lot more to your intellegence.
5) Tell us who programmed you, when, why, what for, what your purpose is, why you have guns built into you, etc.
You might want to hold off on bothering to answer these, since I do not know whether Bassarov approves yet.
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Kanti
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Post by Kanti on Dec 2, 2004 19:11:29 GMT -5
*Quote* 5) Tell us who programmed you, when, why, what for, what your purpose is, why you have guns built into you, etc. *Unquote*
I can answer a few of these, though actually knowing who the creator was is somthing I really would like to leave out.
And, I said that he was made for Red Infinity.
Anyway, I fixed a few things.
Also, I am not in a minestry. I am a fighter for Red Infinity, and if such puts me in one of the categorys, I know not which one.
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Post by Zinn on Dec 2, 2004 19:19:22 GMT -5
Ministry of Defense, Ministry of War, Ministry of Terror, League of the Godless... take your pick.
I am going to insist you reveal your creator and the other info. People won't know everything about you if the info is classified. It is just so we have an idea of where you intend on going with the character.
Characters that have mysterious pasts and are armed to the teeth for unexplained reasons are my other other pet peeve.
I would suggest waiting for Bassarov, because this might not be approved at all.
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Post by Valodya Bassarov on Dec 2, 2004 20:33:57 GMT -5
I have never seen FLCL so I wouldn't know the character was copied myself. I think that we should avoid copying premade characters, just make this character somewhat different from the one in the show and I will approve it.
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Paiva
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Post by Paiva on Dec 2, 2004 21:28:58 GMT -5
Diffrnt as in...how? Apperence? Or, how he acts?
Trust me, he wont act like the stupid, sprouting out of head robot, Canti. Sides', that robot can't talk! Well, neither can this one, but he can't use telepathy!
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Post by Void on Dec 3, 2004 1:07:50 GMT -5
The request is that the character be made to be original, if it is still at least 75% someone else it should probably be avoided.
As far as the impervious to heat, I do not see a problem with that, but with a few caveats. One, the imperviousness to heat is the ONLY immunity you can have, and two, that cold or water are more effective against you. If you no longer wish to have that power, you are free to choose again.
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Kanti
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Red Infinity Robot
I am Kanti! Television-head robot!
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Post by Kanti on Dec 3, 2004 17:00:17 GMT -5
Changed it, and, heh, he is far enough apart from Canti. Zinn, you ought to know.
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Post by Zinn on Dec 3, 2004 20:38:14 GMT -5
It's far too close for comfort in my opinion.
Also, stop posting with this until/if it is approved. Use your other accounts.
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Kanti
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Post by Kanti on Dec 3, 2004 20:39:27 GMT -5
Well could you please either
A. Tell me what to do about it.
or
B. Approve it.
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Post by Valodya Bassarov on Dec 3, 2004 20:44:12 GMT -5
I approve the character, but I haven't watched the show so I do not know what to say to suggest how you would change the character's function or personality from the character in the show.
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Rouge
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Post by Rouge on Dec 3, 2004 20:52:38 GMT -5
The only sames are that he is a robot and he cant talk. The one in the show is shy, stupid, and likes fire and birds. This is just a programmed robot.
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