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Post by Zinn on Dec 3, 2004 21:32:16 GMT -5
Why is that good for the plot, or relevant? That is another problem. That's why I want you to expand your bio. How is this character relevant to the plot? How does he tie in?
You could have used a different name. Characters with absolutely no personality whatsoever and no story don't contribute to the plot.
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Post by Rouge on Dec 3, 2004 21:37:19 GMT -5
He is in the plot so I may introduce a later chart. I will bring in, Artemis. Based on Artemis Fowl, if you have heard of the series. So, exactly what do you want me to say? I will change my BIO... but exactly how does it need to be relevent? I though it was...  |
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Post by Zinn on Dec 3, 2004 21:55:52 GMT -5
A character that has no personality and does nothing other than follow orders, doesn't contribute to the plot at all.
Also, please do not bring Artemis Fowl into this.
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Post by Rouge on Dec 3, 2004 22:31:36 GMT -5
:-/Awwwwies, alright. Well, he does. He dosent have a personality...so...donno what I should do. Make him a spy? Make him go undercover as a rebel? I really dont know........
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Post by Rouge on Dec 5, 2004 18:35:30 GMT -5
Cant think of what to do about that. So, as soon as I get on that account, Ill delete this thread. Just give me a couple of minutes.
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Post by Kanti on Dec 5, 2004 18:52:37 GMT -5
Oh, great, it only allowed mt to delete the first post, Zinn or Void, please delete this thread for me.
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