Obsidain butterfly

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

Name:Obsidain butterfly

Age:600

Race:Vampire

Nationality: German

Gender:female

Alignment:rebel

Organization:rebel

Occupation: herbalist

Weapon: Brownning high powered gun

Stats: intelligence:142
strength:148
charisma:142
spirit:142
defense:142
endurance:142
speed:142

powers:
#1:sommon the dead to do my bidding
#2:blink:to apear instantly where ever I want to go
#3:to throw energy balls

Weakness: fire, silver

appearance: long black curly hair, slender, 5'4, 120lbs, wears black leather all the time.

Personality:She is the quiet type untell someone makes her angery, very deturmind at every thing she starts. If she says she is going to do somthing she does it, dominering.


story:


WHY YOUR CHARACTER IS IN THEIR GIVEN POLITICAL GROUP: Her family got killed for being witches in 1415 and she was left without anyone to take care of her. She was found wondering the streets by an anarcist vamp. who took her in and made her one of them. But as the U.S.A government fell she decided to join the rebels in her quest to find her long lost brother. Her name was given to her by the vamp. that found her, he said her hair was as dare as obsidain and she reminded him of a butterfly when he found her....flutering about on the street.

BACKGROUND OF WHY THEY BELIEVE AS THEY DO OR WHAT THEIR RELIGIOUS OR POLITICAL BELIEFS ARE AND WHY:her religion is witchcraft....she decided a long time ago that since they acuse her of being a witch why not study and become one!

A SHORT HISTORY OF WHERE THEY WERE BORN, THEIR FAMILY, AND IF THEY HAVE ANY LOVED ONES STILL ALIVE: She was born in Germany but her family moved to the new world when she was very yung and she has no loved ones left for they were all burned alive. Except for a 1/2 brother.

THEIR PURPOSE OR GOAL IN LIFE: She thinks she may have a brother still alive that she did not know about, a half brother that may have been turned in to a vamp. also. She has heard rumors and wants to find out as much as she can about him.
#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys#nosmileys

[Void]

Powerwise I can approve this, but you may need a more complete story.

[Mikhael Nadyezhda (Mischa)]

Yeah I like it, but I agree with Void, maybe a little more in depth bio. If you want an example, check out someone else's joining form and see how they did it. Most people write their life story in a few paragraphs.

However, if you want to come back to your bio, you can. With some of my characters, I've made up their story as they went along, so you can jump right into the main quest right now if you wish, since you do seem to have the foundation of what you want to do with your character already fleshed out.

Oh, and I forgot to mention, you can ask anyone anything in the chatbox on the bottom of the homepage.

[Valodya Bassarov]

I noticed that you are from Minnesota. That is cool, since there are about a half dozen people on this site from Minnesota.

Most of us are from the Duluth area.

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

Mikhael said:

Yeah I like it, but I agree with Void, maybe a little more in depth bio. If you want an example, check out someone else's joining form and see how they did it. Most people write their life story in a few paragraphs.

However, if you want to come back to your bio, you can. With some of my characters, I've made up their story as they went along, so you can jump right into the main quest right now if you wish, since you do seem to have the foundation of what you want to do with your character already fleshed out.

Oh, and I forgot to mention, you can ask anyone anything in the chatbox on the bottom of the homepage.

ok cool ill put more depth in it however how do I modify this.... I see no option..........oh! there it is lol....

said:

I noticed that you are from Minnesota. That is cool, since there are about a half dozen people on this site from Minnesota.

Most of us are from the Duluth area.

really? cool! Im in the austin area.......

[Valodya Bassarov]

There should be a modify button on the upper right corner of your post, if you do not see this, just copy your post and edit it in a new post of the profile on this same joining thread.

[Zinn]

Hi, I'm Zinn,and a specialize in modding stories and politics. Here are some specific pointers for improving your bio.

1) Please explain how you got your name, and its meaning, since it is not a standard name.

2) The word is spelled 'obsidian'

3) If your character is American, when did she go from Germany to America? Also, according to the chronology, you would have arrived about a hundred years before the Pilgrims.

4) Hating the government is not a suffiecient explanation for being an anarchist. Hating the government merely means that you are anti-establishment. Also, Red Infinity's people are quite different from the superstitious people of the middle ages, so hatng a new government for somthing that happened almost a thousand years ago is rather illogical.

5) I am going to have to ask Jareth for help with this, because I don't really know that much about Wicca, but I do know there is a "harm not' rule, because any harm will be revisited upon the inflictor, times a certain amount. I can't remember the exact number.

6) Vampires are usually weak against sunlight and silver on RI.

7) "quiet" "until" "angry" "determined" "domineering"
"summon"

8) Wicca as an official religion was not around 1000 years before the current time in the RP. Paganism might have existed in secret, but not Wicca. Wicca is a renewal of something old.

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

Zinn said:

5) I am going to have to ask Jareth for help with this, because I don't really know that much about Wicca, but I do know there is a "harm not' rule, because any harm will be revisited upon the inflictor, times a certain amount. I can't remember the exact number.

6) Vampires are usually weak against sunlight and silver on RI.

8) Wicca as an official religion was not around 1000 years before the current time in the RP. Paganism might have existed in secret, but not Wicca. Wicca is a renewal of something old.

aye I know all of these I was merly makeing a fictional character. but however I am going to elaborate more with her storey I was just in a rush.....thanx for the tips.....

[Valodya Bassarov]

If you want to start posting, you can just go to the Main Thread 3 to the current thread that everyone is posting on.

You could try posting to Usha, Brady, and Kisa since you might get along with those characters. They are by the rebel base in Helsinki.

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

ok will do....

[Zinn]

Even if it is a fictional character, you should strive for accuracy. Please run a spell check. Also, being raised as an anarchist is not a good explanation. I suggest you go run a search at wikipedia.org about anarchism, and form your character's affiliation from that information. There are also a bunch of links about anarchism in the anarchist thread of the political party forum.

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

I think it is logical....but whatever.... so I have a few spelling errors ;D big deal you know what Im saying....

[Valodya Bassarov]

Since you are new, I will give you a week to feel things out and post, but then after that week you have to make the appropriate changes to your join form or else you will not be allowed to post in the main thread.

You might want to change from being an anarchist to being just a rebel, since anarchists believe in a set of ideals but anyone who is against Red Infinity is a rebel.

[~*~Obsidain butterfly~*~]

hmmm that might be easier

[Valodya Bassarov]

Okay, I am going to help you out then. I am going to change your profile so it says you are a rebel, but you still have to come up with a reason why you would dislike Red Infinity. If you are Wiccan maybe you dislike Red Infinity because the government is against religion.