Heishin

[Heishin]

Name: Heishin

Age: 4,587

Race: Dragon

Nationality: Japan

Gender: Male

Alignment: Stalinist

Organization: Red Infinity

Ministry: International HQ

Occuptaion: Soldier

Weapon: Long Katana, small pistol

Stats:
Intelligence-100
Strength-300
Charisma-50
Spirit-100
Defense-50
Endurance-100
Speed-300

Powers:

Teleport: can teleport from place to place

Dragon: can turn into dragon form

Invisibility: can make self invisible

Fire Blade: Can make sword turn on fire, making it much stronger

Freeze: can stare at someone and stop them from moving for 5 minutes

Weaknesses:

Light: Light will sear his skin

Angels: If fighing an angel, he will be very weak

appearance: Average height, brown hair, brown eyes, pretty muscular.

Personality: Can be very nice as well as very mean, has a quick temper, likes children.

story: When Heishin was born, he was the son of two respected dragons. They lived in a huge mountain in Japan. One day soldiers came and killed his mother and father because they had pillaged their village. Heishin managed to escape the soldiers. Heishin remained in hiding for 4,300 years. He taught himself to take human form, and to fight with a sword. He has come out of hiding and lives as a wanderer. Heishin is in Red Infinity so he can take revenge on man-kind for killing his family. He is buddihst and his goal in life is to soar among the stars with his dead family.

[Lady Violet]

If you work for Red Infinity, any spirituality or religious beliefs could get you killed or imprisoned by those you work with. You can start.

[Void]

A weakness to light alone is rather delibitating. If that's what you're going for, fine, but otherwise you might want to specify light-based attacks.

[Zinn]

Please change the following:
1) Buddhists are pacifists and do not believe in revenge.
2) Red Infinity will kill you if you have a religion. They are purging a lot of people currently, so you should change that unless you want your character to die very quickly.
3) Could you write a few complete sentences about his personality? Please be more specific than "he can be very nice or very mean" because that applies to most people.
4) Revenge on humanity is not a valid motivation for political beliefs. Please explain why you are a Stalinist more specifically, especially since Red Infinity does not allow its dragons to kill indiscriminately. It would look bad.
5) Buddhists believe in reincarnation and nirvana. Therefore, he wouldn't be soaring in the skies with his dead family. The Buddhist view on death is that it is a part of life. If they were killed or died, then they will be reincarnated. If they reached enlightenment during their lives through meditation, then they attain nirvana, which is kind of like non-existance. Your soul becomes one with God, kind of.
6) Chinese dragons have power over rain. European dragons breath fire. I am not so sure of Japanese dragons, but I assume that they would be more similar to Chinese dragons than European dragons.
7) If your character works for Red Infinity, then he must have a specific occupation. Wanderer is not enough.
8) Please choose a more specific ministry. International HQ is the brain center for Red Infinity. They already have a few dragons in their employ.